A poem is it?

January 27, 2007 · Filed under Uncategorized

Hey everybody! I stumbled upon this poem a few weeks ago. Tell me what you think of it…

Teachers

Some teachers are round,
while others are thin.
Some teachers are funny,
while others don’t even grin.
They’re different in many ways,
though their goal is the same.
(Although they sometimes
forget our names!)
To teach us all sorts
of interesting things.
And make us better
human beings.

-Genevieve Yew-
16/1/200

I did stumble upon it! In my head! :p
I think the English is too primary level…
What do you think??

2 Responses so far »

  1. 1

    C i A said,

    January 28, 2007 @ 6:46 pm

    Kudos!
    two thumbs up…
    simplicity is better.
    at least it is understandable.

  2. 2

    Debbie said,

    January 30, 2007 @ 10:32 pm

    Hi Gin!
    It sounds nice….
    Actually if u say it sounds too primary, i would say change a few words, but since Cia says simplicity is better. Then I say ok!
    Haha…. I don’t have an opinion on my own. That’s why I have hard times MAKING decisions…
    P.S. I kno where the inspiration came from…. *hint hint* the card Cia & I sent u right….?? =p
    I’ve copied ur blog entries & saved it into my iPod coz right now I’m in school… & I didn’t bring my lappie so I’m saving it & bringing it home to read…. I keep coming online, keep thinking I need to read someone’s blog but I keep forgetting who. I keep going to cia’s but hers isn’t updated yet then I remembered! it was urs…! oopz! Pecah lubang… hehehe… I didn’t forget! ok well, I did! See I’m very unopinionated…. if that’s a word! C ya! I’ll commment nex time when I’ve read them all…. Ciao~
    P.S. If Dad shouts at u, nex time, tell him off. Tell him NICELY, “u don’t have to shout at me….I’m still quite new at using Ms Outlook Express.” Then he’ll kno he was too harsh. U keep quiet, he’ll conitinue to chop ur head off. Hahaha… so to speak. hope it works. Ciao (agen)~

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